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Just another apocalyptic story. A lot of the ideas in this came from a dream I had, but I replaced the young emotionally troubled girl & her shitty apartment from the dream with an arrogant douche actor & his luxurious penthouse. So, this took me half a day to write and I'm finally relieved at having finished it.
Let me know what you think by commenting.
Let me know what you think by commenting.
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Nicely dark.
The character's emotions weren't all that described but the way his world worked made it quite obvious what kind of person he was.
The sinkholes were a great touch, but maybe some more detail of the creatures?
I also might have him jump instead of shoot himself, make the phrase more literal.
Hope I am not being too bossy, but it's what I think.
The character's emotions weren't all that described but the way his world worked made it quite obvious what kind of person he was.
The sinkholes were a great touch, but maybe some more detail of the creatures?
I also might have him jump instead of shoot himself, make the phrase more literal.
Hope I am not being too bossy, but it's what I think.